Desknight 2010-06-02 14:13:24

Wow, you've created an entire story and world with these characters, but chances are you're just going to use them for comedy aren't you?! XD Eh, just kidding, look forward to seeing more of your work, its all good :)

superfrickingbigmac 2010-06-02 14:32:32

Sweet a new character awesome!

Desknight 2010-06-02 15:35:12

wow you're making a graphic novel too! I want to do one but I dont know how the heck to print out the books like that.

megakill32 2010-06-02 15:50:22

introduction i guess but i don't think his intro should be long thats about all i can say really im looking forward to your work you have a lot of potential :3

Hoekzema 2010-06-02 17:30:52

Check out my sisters photographs while your on Deviant art. I think you sort of have the same taste. Her name's Milandeentjestoe

Taro326 2010-06-02 19:36:55

Curious, will you be putting up an audition for Leem because if you are. I want to try for his voice.

SkyFL 2010-06-02 19:58:59

I SAY
i predict you're into roleplay in forums like gaia,or deviantart chatrooms...
I CAN SMELL IT

or you simply make drawings and characters for teh lulz

Axel1617 2010-06-02 20:44:47

I don't know lol, if you ask me go into the story the same way you would normally. This IS newgrounds though....you'd have to try really hard to out do the randomness of 90% of the flash animations here. Do whatever feels comfortable. Yes unfortunatly there will be a few people that flame it....but look at it this way. Being popular on the internet has a price. ;) Looking forward to seeing the next one.

Ragnao 2010-06-02 21:36:31

Forgive my ignorance but I was shocked on Dimébian and Asédai. Didn't thinkthey had names (besides furry and elfs [again forgive my ignorance]). Ya learn new things each day.

As for the Leem dude, i would go with story and as it continues introduce his personality and character.

Another thing that would be a fun twist you could do would be making him introduce himself breaking the 4th wall,and leaving the rest of the characters all "wtf?".Food for thought?

Either way, whatever you make will be entertaining to watch. :D
So hows the mac doing? ;D

manniest 2010-06-02 21:49:33

he kinda reminds me of link

CrazyMasterToast43 2010-06-03 03:40:25

You are great!
You know that?!
xD

CrazyMasterToast43 2010-06-03 03:42:49

You're like me to much of great character but not enough time to tell the story.
:p
Cool.
Anyway what lead you to NG's anyway? You are to nice to be here.
it's.....creepy....
xD

CrazyMasterToast43 2010-06-03 03:59:42

wow great story skills, finished and it was....wow....
How long did it take you to come up with that?
(When I did this for my 250+ characters it took me 5 years)
please answer or I'll cry.

Sterance 2010-06-03 04:23:18

i actually liked your latest flash (i had low expectations having seen many failed anime attempts). the pace is a bit slow and the recording of the voices get pitchy and crackle my speakers, especially the old man's voice. other than those things, it was nice; i'd watch the next one

SkyFL 2010-06-03 19:02:55

FFFFFFFFUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU-

depressedstorms 2010-06-04 09:51:41

You could have it to where Leem is moving back to where ever your characters live? Like he has a past with them which could be possibly show through photo's one of the characters have. I know it is not the best idea but eh... I tried. Also yes this is Chill from Deviant Art. :D

LazySuperMan 2010-06-08 16:08:05

yay! Krista is back! XD
I'm sure the flash will turn out awesome :P

Patrick57 2010-06-09 16:04:41

I think that he needs to be the guy who lives next door or an old friend who came to visit. Keep up the good work

multiphantom456 2010-06-10 01:12:54

huh... he looks a little like link!

asome232 2010-06-12 01:32:24

i think giving no story story would be best. you sorta did that for "i said no" and that was very funny but what do i know? all i really know is it's artists like you that make me go back to newgrounds :)